Anyone up for looking over a synopsis?

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Sixty years later – can you imagine? Sixty years have passed? – sixty years later, there were just two of them left, dotty old ladies now. Their children grown, even grandchildren grown, husbands gone, friends gone. The two of them still carrying on, surviving. Making the best of things. Scraping together some extra money out of social security checks and widows’ pensions for a cruise. Come Talent Show night, they pulled together baby-doll costumes and sang songs from the old days. A shame more of the girls weren’t there with them, but the two survivors kept laughing. Just like the old days.

Jesse, that's lovely. I'm so tickled every time you post a drabble. It's a side of you we never get to see.

Sail, that's a very good beginning. Now, of course, I want to know more.

Jilli! I'm clapping my hands in glee. I DO believe in fairygoth storytellers, I DO believe in fairygoth storytellers, I DO believe!

Aw, thanks, Beverly. I'm kind of wondering if it would be worth the explanation to send it to my grandmother, since it's about her. Even though that picture isn't as old as all that.

Okay, one more, and then I really am walking away from the computer for the night.

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The village of Wollston Ripple is renowned for being the home of the only banshee that does not foretell death and despair. The banshee takes the usual form of a young woman washing clothing in a local stream; however, instead of blood-stained garments, she appears to be washing doll clothing. She does not cry or scream, but, if approached, will recite limericks and give clues as to where lost treasures from one's childhood can be found before vanishing in a small shower of forget-me-nots.

Teppy, if you get stuck for a topic, yanking another ten photos out of that archive seems like gold.

Never fear -- I already have about 30 more marked in a reminder private LJ post.

SUsan, just got in, but I'll check it out in the morning. Send it on.

I'm not sure about the number, but it's the same one Jesse used. [link] As She Clicks- 1944

“You can’t take our picture right now, Doris,” I say.”Everyone will think all we do at the magazine is drink.”

”Not true,” Betty says. “They will think we chase men, too.” Betty is really funny, but it sneaks up on you. She is kind of the Rosalind Russell of our crowd. If she did chase a man, he would chase back.

“No, “ Doris argues. “They’ll understand we’re celebrating. “ Our magazine is one year old today. “They do it at the New Yorker.”

“But they’re from New York,” I say, knowing I’ll get outvoted, “They do everything.”

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Venice, he had said. We must feed the pigeons. She had smiled and humored him; it was their honeymoon, after all, a time for whims, caprices, follies. She'd even sprinkled birdseed into his hat without a murmur about the inevitable cleaning bills.

So, Venice. A few years later, Constantinople; then Casablanca, each gilded with his laughter, made gemütlich by his company. Next year, perhaps, Jerusalem?

Apparently not. She leans on the single permissable suitcase; again it sticks. She removes the photograph album and drops it into the trash. Now she must travel light; the memories need no room at all.