Zoe: First rule of battle, little one. Don't ever let 'em know where you are. Mal: Whoo-hoo! I'm right here! I'm right here! You want some of me? Yeah, you do! Come on! Come on! Aaah! Whoo-hoo! Zoe: Of course, there are other schools of thought...

'The Message'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Pix - Mar 15, 2005 2:24:32 pm PST #593 of 10001
We're all getting played with, babe. -Weird Barbie

ita, that one stings. Wow.


deborah grabien - Mar 15, 2005 2:28:37 pm PST #594 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Agreed. That one has teeth.


Pix - Mar 15, 2005 2:46:49 pm PST #595 of 10001
We're all getting played with, babe. -Weird Barbie

Photo #5: [link]

She’d always loved that nightgown. Gramma had made it from the fabric they’d picked out together, soft flannel covered in flowers. The lace at the cuffs and collar had been a surprise. She remembered how she had begged to be allowed to change and how Mom said young ladies didn’t wear pajamas at the dinner table. She remembered Dad saying they could make a birthday exception, and then how Butch had wanted to wear jammies too. It had felt so wicked to break the rules, to eat her meatloaf with bare feet kicking under the table.

Wicked was simpler then.


deborah grabien - Mar 15, 2005 2:57:56 pm PST #596 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Kristin, is Brian Butch? I mean, linking them to the names in the photo's title?


Pix - Mar 15, 2005 2:58:27 pm PST #597 of 10001
We're all getting played with, babe. -Weird Barbie

Missed the title until after I'd posted. Editing now.


deborah grabien - Mar 15, 2005 3:07:18 pm PST #598 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Your take on Baby Brother Butch is kinder than mine. I had him spree-killing Chris and Judy, his parents.

What? I write mysteries for a living, damn it.

(edited for a truly wretched Freudian slip of a typo)


Pix - Mar 15, 2005 3:10:14 pm PST #599 of 10001
We're all getting played with, babe. -Weird Barbie

I wanted to go much further with how far she'd gone from the rules of her childhood to where she was now, but I ran out of words.


deborah grabien - Mar 15, 2005 3:15:12 pm PST #600 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

I wonder if she's related to Jean, the girl leaving for San Francisco in 1967?


Pix - Mar 15, 2005 3:17:33 pm PST #601 of 10001
We're all getting played with, babe. -Weird Barbie

I was imagining her on the verge of divorce after years of being taught about the sanctity of marriage, yadda yadda. Obviously the drabble went elsewhere, persnickety little beastie.


deborah grabien - Mar 15, 2005 3:26:03 pm PST #602 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Heh. Whereas my mind immediately saw all that dark sixties/seventies paneling and lace doilies spattered with blood.

Mystery writer? Me?