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'War Stories'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Anne W. - Mar 14, 2005 9:53:21 am PST #543 of 10001
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

Fabulous idea for a drabble. I love all the ones that have been posted before. Connies made me laugh, Deb's made me want to know what happened next, Beverly's was wonderfully sultry and tense, and Sail's made me choke up.

Photo #5

It's easy to snigger at photos from that era. Everything was sublimely ugly - the clothes, the hair, the oh-so-fake wood paneling. Just one look, and you knew that room reeked of cigarette smoke.

But with pictures of my own childhood, it's different. The room wasn't ugly; it was where I watched cartoons, and where Dad begged me to sit through the Sunday afternoon Western (I bet you'll like this one). The clothes weren't ugly; they were my mom's clothes, and I coveted them. And yes, I can smell the cigarette smoke and Lemon Pledge, but it smells like home.


Connie Neil - Mar 14, 2005 9:55:23 am PST #544 of 10001
brillig

Anne, that's exactly the way I felt about that picture. That was the living room of my youth, and mocking it now is to mock my own past, which doesn't deserve it. People forgot how their children are going to laugh at them.


Steph L. - Mar 14, 2005 9:59:29 am PST #545 of 10001
the hardest to learn / was the least complicated

Fabulous idea for a drabble.

Oh, thank god. I was afraid that people were going to hate it.

Anne, that's exactly the way I felt about that picture. That was the living room of my youth

Mine, too. And I want to drabble it, not to mock it, but because it evokes so strongly a specific feeling that I associate with Saturday mornings -- well, not mornings, more like 1 p.m., when cartoons are over, and I felt completely futless.


deborah grabien - Mar 14, 2005 10:01:58 am PST #546 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

photo #5

Familily Snapshot

When had it started? When had he clicked over into darkness?

She could wonder forever, and never find a straight answer. She knew that.

Trailing through her parents' house like a ghost, touching the dark wood paneling Chris had put up, the lacy throws Judy had loved, the accreted filth of neglect griming her fingers, her heart, her memories.

The house was hers now. She could hardly breathe the stale air, with its taint of blood and dust.

Donna paused, hearing the local church chimes. Eight o'clock. Butch, beloved baby brother gone wrong, was keeping his appointment with a lethal injection.


Connie Neil - Mar 14, 2005 10:04:38 am PST #547 of 10001
brillig

My take on #10 [link]

During the War, the men were all gone. And it seemed stupid to worry about things like hair appointments and fashion when there were bombs falling.

"There's a war on," we told each other, consoling ourselves over things we missed. Like husbands and brothers and sons.

Still, when the cannery machinery broke down and we slipped out back for some fresh air, it didn't take much for us to turn giddy for the camera. There was a war on, and it was important to remember how to live.


deborah grabien - Mar 14, 2005 10:07:24 am PST #548 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Connie, that's lovely.


Connie Neil - Mar 14, 2005 10:09:21 am PST #549 of 10001
brillig

For some reason writing that has made me terribly weepy.


Anne W. - Mar 14, 2005 10:14:04 am PST #550 of 10001
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

For some reason writing that has made me terribly weepy.

Maybe it's because large parts of it are starting to apply to us again? In different ways, and differing degrees of magnitude, but still...


Connie Neil - Mar 14, 2005 10:19:20 am PST #551 of 10001
brillig

Maybe it's because large parts of it are starting to apply to us again? In different ways, and differing degrees of magnitude, but still...

That's some of it, but for me, I think there are various Mother issues starting to rear their ugly little heads. She was a teenager during WWII, and she told lots of stories about her and her own mother working in kitchens and laundries etc.


deborah grabien - Mar 14, 2005 10:33:57 am PST #552 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

With apologies to Mister Sondheim

Photo #8

Follies of 1933

The photo had been taken in October, stiff, awkward, acting it out: Essie in her braids, Minnie with her broad cheeks, Gert with her cornhusker's calluses, Jean with her sensitive stomach, Glad with her homesickness.

They'd met at a casting call, five little girls from West Nowhere, Broadway baby wannabes, quavering voices, high kicks, laughter and hope and dreams. They took the apartment on West 48th Street together.

A decade later, they'd scattered and lost touch. Two had found jobs, one was dead at the hands of a back-alley abortionist, two had gone home, fleeing, seeking the solace of familiarity.