These girls have the most beautiful dresses. And so do I -- how about that?

Kaylee ,'Shindig'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


deborah grabien - Jan 29, 2006 2:10:24 pm PST #5307 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Why? I gather that means yes, it's tricky, but I'm clueless about the whole ritual. Why is it tricky? Is he someone you care about?


Strix - Jan 29, 2006 2:18:17 pm PST #5308 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger

Nope, internet date. And he looks fuun, cute, interesting, smart...I just HATE first dates.

I feel kinda like I'm up on a block, and I should have "caveat emptor" tattooed on my head.


deborah grabien - Jan 29, 2006 2:20:43 pm PST #5309 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

I feel kinda like I'm up on a block, and I should have "caveat emptor" tattooed on my head.

Shouldn't he be feeling that way as well, then? I mean, same deal for him, right? And if you're both in the same boat, why worry?

And no, not really off topic. Stuff about how this stuff works, it goes into how I write. But honestly, I come from the Land of Rockonia, and the quiet forest denizens there rarely dated. We merely hooked up.


Strix - Jan 29, 2006 2:38:09 pm PST #5310 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger

Yes, it is the same deal. And I should be fine -- I'm judging him, too. But I'm a hooker-upper too, which is why dates make me all bleargh.

(and no cheap hooker jokes, either!) I'm ready, though. My loins are girded, and I am having a smoke. It doesn't help that this date is at a non-smoking coffe bar. No cocktail, no smokes = stressed dater Erin


Strix - Jan 29, 2006 2:41:49 pm PST #5311 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger

And...I'm off.


deborah grabien - Jan 29, 2006 2:43:51 pm PST #5312 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Go get 'em!


Strix - Jan 29, 2006 2:44:25 pm PST #5313 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger

gulp. Oui.


SailAweigh - Jan 29, 2006 6:23:15 pm PST #5314 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Deb, just thought you'd like to know I read "Restless" on the flight home today. Really, really liked it. I can see why he reacted the way he did in London Calling, now. I had a feeling it had to be something like that, but it was nice to see it actually written. A real gut punch.


deborah grabien - Jan 29, 2006 6:37:09 pm PST #5315 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Sail, from your lips to the Publishing Gods' ears.

The damned story just about killed me, with bloody Louise turning out sympathetic instead of being the bitch I wanted her to be. But yeah, it does its job - synchs up to the Kinkaids, shows where Patrick gets his loyalty issues from and why he admires it when used what he defines as properly. This is why he let Bree off the hook in Rock and Roll Never Forgets, when he had her cold on premeditated collusion.

It also shows why he can't sit still for too long. Always running from the memory of Louise, always caught in the loss of his partner Pete, and always running toward anything that might get him one more shot at taking down Terry Goff.

And I'm getting to that point in the long synopsis for London Calling. I seriously would rather have a root canal while listening to George Bush talks about Iraq than deal with this damned thing. But it's about 2/3 written. Soon, soon, soon...


sj - Jan 29, 2006 6:39:13 pm PST #5316 of 10001
"There are few hours in life more agreeable than the hour dedicated to the ceremony known as afternoon tea."

Knowing nothing about the publishing world, I always assumed that someone at the publishing house wrote the synopsis. Especially since that often seem to have so little to do with what the book is really like.