Gifty?
'A Hole in the World'
The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...
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See, I will always associate it with Jane Fonda as Iris the hooker in one of my alltime favourite movies, "Steelyard Blues".
So for me, it's a cult song. Plus the whole JGB band connection. Plus the perfect suitability for the JP and Bree thing. Plus I loves it, I does.
Oh, I do, too. It's just more on my mental "'70s hits" playlist than on my rock one.
Gifty?
Just a little one. I may actually get to the post office tomorrow, too.
Oh yeah, baby -- it's still Monday, and I've got the new drabble topic!
Challenge #93 (thank-yous for shitty gifts) is now closed.
Challenge #94 is one that was actually suggested by Connie many many months ago (I bookmarked it and then forgot about it, and then a few nights ago I was going through my bookmarks and found it): the view outside your bedroom window -- or contemplations on why you don't have a bedroom window.
"Restless" - the Patrick Ormand short backstory, for blind submission to the MWA anthology - is done.
Reader? Anyone? Please?
please don't let this suck
Drabble: the view outside your bedroom window
I woke to heat, an angry, shuddering blast of it through the screen. Nudging Stephen awake, I sat up, still half dreaming, and raised my face to the window.
Across the sleeping street in the dark gray hours before dawn, the small shop was a Technicolor shock of light. Flames licked across the face of the building, devouring its carefully lettered signs and scorching the once white brick. Another tongue of flame burst from the roof, reaching for the branches of the elm that shaded the parking lot.
Beneath the sheet, Stephen’s arm curled around me. We watched it burn.
Whoa. NICE, Amy.
Yeah. Way more dramatic than I would think from the topic.
True story. I made the dry cleaner's a little quainter than it was in real life, but it actually happened. Very spooky. Amazing that even across the street we could feel that heat.
Ooh, Amy. Nice intimate touch, there.
Here's mine. Not cohering so much, but actually written, so I'm counting that a plus.
Bedroom Window View
Having to push the Berchtesgaden gasthaus beds together was compensated for by fresh bread and coffee on the shoebox-sized balcony, gazing at our personal Alp.
On Thomas Mann Strasse, military housing with windows like dovecotes reflected our own across the school playground; construction cranes claimed the horizon all the time we lived there.
When we moved home, we could see Pilot Mountain from our window, on clear days, until we switched bedrooms so we could divide the large one for the kids. Our new room's high windows were full of the tops of pines, morning sun, rising moon, and starshine.