Ah, yes, of course. The gypsies, they gave you your soul. The gypsies are filthy people. Ptui! We shall speak of them no more.

Ilona Costa Bianchi ,'The Girl in Question'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


deborah grabien - Dec 03, 2005 6:46:44 am PST #5057 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Oh, nice one!


SailAweigh - Dec 03, 2005 7:20:25 am PST #5058 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Belated congratulations to Allyson and Kristen! It's so nice to see folks moving onward and upward.

I had a drabble. Unfortunately, it's sitting on the hard drive of a computer at work that doesn't have e-mail on it. I meant to copy it onto a disk so I could send it to myself, but I got busy and forgot. Dang. Hopefully, I can slink in with it before Teppy closes out the topic on Monday.

And it's a good thing I reread that before I posted or there would have been a good oops to add to Tep's NaNoisms. I still like the one that said, "suddenly there was a loud boob." Hee.


dcp - Dec 03, 2005 6:32:03 pm PST #5059 of 10001
The more I learn, the more I realize how little I know.

Thanks, deb. It's a memory that still makes me laugh. I wrote three variations trying to get it down to drabble size, then had a terrible time choosing which one to post. I finally picked that one because it is closest to how I tell the story in person.


sumi - Dec 05, 2005 5:15:51 am PST #5060 of 10001
Art Crawl!!!

I was shopping on Saturday and saw this Jane Austen Action Figure and had this immediate urge to buy it. . . but then realized that there are probably far too many buffista writer types who might want one.

The store I was at also had Oscar Wilde, Shakespeare and Benjamin Franklin action figures.


Ailleann - Dec 05, 2005 10:52:19 am PST #5061 of 10001
vanguard of the socialist Hollywood liberal homosexualist agenda

Sneaky sneaky, lost and found, beware the porn...

She remembered the power of touch, of human contact. Once there were moments of warmth, of desire, but one by one they were lost to the wind like dust. Her need, sharp and sparkling, had been worn and faded from the passage of time. Lost to her, piece by piece.

His fingers trailing down her arm were a shock, like raindrops on parched earth. His kisses were the storm, sudden and insistent, and his touch drenched her with desire. She clung to him, finding herself again at twined fingers, pressed lips, skin on skin. She came, and she came back.


sj - Dec 05, 2005 11:38:55 am PST #5062 of 10001
"There are few hours in life more agreeable than the hour dedicated to the ceremony known as afternoon tea."

this Jane Austen Action Figure

Oooh, must have!


deborah grabien - Dec 05, 2005 2:07:57 pm PST #5063 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

She came, and she came back.

That's a gorgeous, gorgeous line.


SailAweigh - Dec 05, 2005 2:59:18 pm PST #5064 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Porny and poignant, nice combo!


Steph L. - Dec 05, 2005 4:09:08 pm PST #5065 of 10001
I look more rad than Lutheranism

New drabble topic!

Challenge #86 (lost and found) is now closed.

Challenge #87 is a "scene" drabble (along the lines of "two people, seated across from each other at a table"): two people, running.

No Logan's Run jokes, for the love of all that's holy....


Ailleann - Dec 06, 2005 8:02:14 am PST #5066 of 10001
vanguard of the socialist Hollywood liberal homosexualist agenda

On a roll! Sweet! Where was this when I was trying to do NaNoWriMo... It's not really a "scene," I guess, but this is what came out when I thought of running.

“Why does everything have to change?”

She trips on his words. Three months ago he was saying “We can’t do this anymore. I can’t handle it. You’ll feel better if you go.”

They had run together forever, rhythm blending like two heartbeats. But he always pulled ahead, too fast for her, chasing dreams that were never enough. Then he’d fall back, pulling her back to the rhythm every time.

He’s falling again, yearning to resonate. But her pace is different, lonely and steady. Their steps only echo past roads, not new paths.

She can’t answer. She’s running for her life.