Kaylee: You're nice, too. Mal: No, I'm not. I'm a mean old man.

'Serenity'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


SailAweigh - Mar 09, 2005 4:41:27 pm PST #461 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

I'm still thinking on the meme. I've only just started writing more than rants on my lj or term papers, so I'm not really sure if I've found my voice yet. I do know what I like to read, though, so I'll probably at least post the reader part of it.


Ginger - Mar 09, 2005 4:49:38 pm PST #462 of 10001
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

I put the writer voice meme in my Live Journal [link] I cheated and put two; I kept trying to whittle it down, but eventually I decided it wasn't worth the head-banging. I just went with the nonfiction, which is my bread and butter. I keep putzing away at bits of fiction, but there was nothing I really liked. I also want to write long, elegant, John McPhee-style nonfiction. I would also like to be taller and have a summer house in the mountains.


Pix - Mar 09, 2005 4:50:29 pm PST #463 of 10001
We're all getting played with, babe. -Weird Barbie

Ginger, I cheated too. I put two short essay excerpts and a poem. I'm not good at following rules.


sj - Mar 09, 2005 4:50:38 pm PST #464 of 10001
"There are few hours in life more agreeable than the hour dedicated to the ceremony known as afternoon tea."

If I had to pick a passage that represents my voice, I would have to go look at old English papers because my I only feel I have found a voice in my nonfiction writing. I am still looking for a voice in fiction.


erikaj - Mar 09, 2005 5:32:47 pm PST #465 of 10001
I'm a fucking amazing catch!--Fiona Gallagher, Shameless(US)

In fiction, either the current work or part of one of my fics where a woman looks deeply into her beloved's eyes and says "It matters because I love you, you idiot." Or same story "I love the People, but if the guy from Born To Run cut me off, I'd still give him the finger." I don't think anyone else would write that sentence.


Beverly - Mar 09, 2005 6:46:37 pm PST #466 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

erika, you're channeling Han Solo. And that's a good thing.

Ginger, I loved your pieces, and I left comments in your LJ. Kristin, off to read yours.

And thanks for the kind words about the poem.


Ginger - Mar 09, 2005 7:39:48 pm PST #467 of 10001
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

Holding Drabble

Tom and Janet were my parents' friends, but not like their other friends. They had no children. They lived in an apartment downtown. Janet was the only woman I knew who worked, and her perfect nails seemed the height of sophistication. They took Russian lessons and went to Russia. They served wine and chicken Kiev. Their presents were always exotic. One year, I got a tiny Russian nesting doll. They are only names on Christmas cards now, but I still hold onto a wooden doll with flaking paint that holds a smaller doll that holds the love of unrelated relatives.


Gus - Mar 09, 2005 8:32:01 pm PST #468 of 10001
Bag the crypto. Say what is on your mind.

They are only names on Christmas cards now, but I still hold onto a wooden doll with flaking paint that holds a smaller doll that holds the love of unrelated relatives.

I hereby swear to bear Ginger's babies.


deborah grabien - Mar 09, 2005 9:31:37 pm PST #469 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

I hereby swear to bear Ginger's babies.

I want the movie rights.

Seriously - I very rarely pull the writer card out of my sleeve and wave it in the air. But I'm fierce on the subject of voice, and if you don't believe me, would my editor - literally, a living legend - convince you?

I'll dig out my copy tomorrow, but she basically said, in her ongoing essay in "Writing Mysteries", Sue Grafton's compendium, that the one thing every editor prays to walk through their door is an author with a voice. Anything else can be fixed, kluged, reworked - but you can't fake a voice.

And I know this because, in the 1993 edition, she used me as an example of voice. And that's why she fought for both Eyes and Plainsong, despite neither of them being mysteries.

Voice is the Holy Grail for an editor. Embrace your voice.


Beverly - Mar 09, 2005 10:42:05 pm PST #470 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Voice is why we read certain authors. For writers, voice is what keeps 'em coming back.

Ginger, that was lovely. I very much envy your concise clarity.