Mercy is the mark of a great man. Guess I'm just a good man. Well, I'm all right.

Mal ,'Shindig'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Susan W. - Oct 16, 2005 12:58:20 pm PDT #4569 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

t hyperventilates

I just emailed my partial and synopsis to Mary Balogh for critique. Maybe half an hour after I sent it, I got an email back saying she was already printing it out, and that she looked forward to reading it, and that she already liked the sound of it from the synopsis.

Total OMG SQUEE! territory for me, because I'm 99% certain the partial reads better than the synopsis. And if Mary Balogh ends up liking my book and/or the way I write, that's just all kinds of huge and flattering.


SailAweigh - Oct 16, 2005 2:04:59 pm PDT #4570 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Susan, that is such exciting news. Sending much fall-in-love-instantly~ma her way.


Susan W. - Oct 16, 2005 3:58:57 pm PDT #4571 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

I can't believe I'm asking this, since I'm usually the kind of person who knows this stuff, but when you send an editor or agent a partial, do you use a binder clip or just leave the pages lose? (This particular partial is going to come in around 70 pages counting the synopsis, so a regular paper clip wouldn't do the job.)


Amy - Oct 16, 2005 5:43:53 pm PDT #4572 of 10001
Because books.

Rubber band, Susan.


Gus - Oct 16, 2005 5:52:45 pm PDT #4573 of 10001
Bag the crypto. Say what is on your mind.

Rubber band

Seriously?


erikaj - Oct 16, 2005 5:56:30 pm PDT #4574 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Well, you don't want to staple, in case somebody wants to take pages home.


Susan W. - Oct 16, 2005 6:17:52 pm PDT #4575 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

For something this short? I thought that was just for full manuscripts, once you're in 200-page-plus territory.


Jesse - Oct 16, 2005 6:39:17 pm PDT #4576 of 10001
Sometimes I trip on how happy we could be.

I can't imagine a binder clip being substantially different than either a regular paper clip or a rubber band -- they are all easily removed ways to keep papers together, just for different volumes of paper.


Susan W. - Oct 16, 2005 6:48:45 pm PDT #4577 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

I know. I'm just in the irrational stage of preparing a submission where I'm afraid one tiny meaningless misstep will reveal me to be a Rank Amateur whose work is only fit to be sneered at and used as a coaster for the agent's morning latte.

Hey, I said it was irrational.


Susan W. - Oct 16, 2005 7:00:03 pm PDT #4578 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

I mean, I've gone so nuts that I just went to Amazon to confirm the spellings of the names of all the authors in the paragraph where I talk about what kind of readers might like my work. (I don't say, "I am the next Susie Bestseller," since that's arrogant, and what if she hates Susie Bestseller? It's more, "I believe my work would appeal to readers who enjoy the blahbitty blah romances of Jane Popular and Mary Longcareer and the historical fiction Joe Critically-Acclaimed and Bob Pageturner.")

I know how to spell their names. I do. I mean, I've read their books. But I was so afraid of being like all those people who rave about "Jane Austin" that I looked it up to be sure.

I haven't done this seriously since 2003. I have to work through this neurotic phase for the first submission or two.