Right. Sir. Honey.

Zoe ,'The Train Job'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


deborah grabien - Sep 28, 2005 7:27:05 pm PDT #4397 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

I think I gave him a wise ass response by asking him how he could know that by looking at my face, and then pointed out the hand controls on my car.

I went ballistic. This was after he'd asked to see my paperwork and been shown everything he was legally entitled to ask to see. He then threw his demand for more ID, I told him no, I didn't think so and I didn't much care for the reek of harrassment I was getting off his sorry ass, and he'd better have a damned good reason and now would be a good time to produce it. He made his crack, and I went nuts. I don't like authority figures even on good days, but this was two days after San Jose Metro cops had beat our homeless friend John up and taken all his stuff, including the shoes he was wearing, leaving him shivering in a rainstorm until we could get there.

I got out of the car and body-bumped him and screamed at him, along the lines of "listen up you braindead insensitive asshole motherfucking moron, I have multiple sclerosis and there are days when it hurts to put my feet to the ground but you know what, fuckwad, that is NONE OF YOUR FUCKING BUSINESS, I want to see your ID and when I'm done nailing you you'll be scooping dog turds along the highway" melt melt melt.

Son of a bitch took it in total silence, and then apologised and gave me his ID and told me he'd learned something, and he hoped I woudn't report him but he absolutely had it coming.

Bastard. Took the wind right out of my sails. I wanted to stay mad.


Susan W. - Sep 28, 2005 10:08:22 pm PDT #4398 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

FYI, Deb, the Seattle library system now has six copies of Matty Groves on order.


deborah grabien - Sep 28, 2005 10:17:36 pm PDT #4399 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Hoobah! Thanks, Susan - the first library google hits are beginning to show up.

I'm weirdly relaxed about this one. Makes a nice change, although the reason for being relaxed is a bit unsettling.

Back to Cruel Sister. Up over 68K words and I want to try and get it done by the end of next week.


erikaj - Sep 29, 2005 4:48:54 am PDT #4400 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Nobody's ever done that to me but over the telephone. Of course, I helped matters so much by offering to chew a jawbreaker while calling back.


Connie Neil - Sep 29, 2005 6:56:13 am PDT #4401 of 10001
brillig

I bought "Woe is I", a grammar book, last Saturday. I bought it primarily for the wittiness factor, but it's actually managed to explain the subjunctive mood and when to use "was" or "were" and "may" or "might", so it's been worth the money.


deborah grabien - Sep 29, 2005 7:10:57 am PDT #4402 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

I love grammar, but only at a distance. One of our guys at the London office of a Certain Noise Reduction Company That Rhymes With Shmolby was a very sweet, very precise German dude called Elmar. Elmar's secretary Maggie would regularly wander into my office talking to herself, because Elmar's letters were grammatically perfect and completely unreadable.


deborah grabien - Sep 29, 2005 8:28:59 am PDT #4403 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Basic vague idea for MWA submission starring Patrick Ormand: Cases that haunt him, and why, one in each place he's worked, and why he gets so damned restless.

Since the Kinkaid books are all well-known song titles, I'm going to call this one "Jet to the Promised Land". Assuming I can write the fucker.


erikaj - Sep 29, 2005 8:42:54 am PDT #4404 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

I think you should do really great with that.


Amy - Sep 29, 2005 8:51:06 am PDT #4405 of 10001
Because books.

Any idea what the word count is, Deb? You might just focus on one case, rather than a couple, and really go in-depth with why it haunts him.

Such a good idea to use Ormand -- I'd love to see more of him.


Connie Neil - Sep 29, 2005 11:23:21 am PDT #4406 of 10001
brillig

Do we have any Latin experts around here? I'm fairly competent at recognizing Latin roots and deducing general meanings from unfamiliar words, but I need something precise. I had no idea it was such a complicated language, all stems and cases and such. Try to find one word for "blood" and you come upon "well, if it's this case, it has this ending, and what gender is it, too?"

I need the Latin of "blood for the blood," meaning a family member serving the family, up to and including offering blood. There's a Harry Potter fic bunny sitting quietly but purposefully in my brain, and my fetish for precision is demanding proper Latin and not what I can fudge together.