Take me, sir. Take me hard.

Zoe ,'War Stories'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Beverly - Aug 20, 2005 1:30:14 pm PDT #3674 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Heh. Too late. Afternoon over.

...Aaaand I have neither the hardware, the software, or really, the expertise to actually do it. But I'd buy it if somebody else would do it!


Liese S. - Aug 20, 2005 1:38:44 pm PDT #3675 of 10001
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

Hee. Yeah, I know. That's why I would rather pony up the cash. But surely it's an art form that someone is obsessive over. I mean, this is the internet, right? People do fan vids, surely someone is doing arty cloud vids.


SailAweigh - Aug 20, 2005 4:14:22 pm PDT #3676 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

I'd want a whole panel of screens on one wall, so I could look at clouds all day long. Someone make it so, please?

Binary Numbers

They say there are two sides to every story. There is black and white, good and evil. Like computers, humans try to put everything into a binary format; strings of ones and zeros that add up to something meaningful to us, even if not to the uninitiated. Unlike computers, though, we put moral values on our ones and zeros. A one in one person’s math may be good, but to someone else a one is bad. Yet, they are both ones. It’s hard to see the other side of the story when everyone thinks they have-- the one true story.


Beverly - Aug 20, 2005 4:18:08 pm PDT #3677 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

I like, Sail. Okay, all caught up. I'm going to go watch tv/dvds now and get all behind again.


deborah grabien - Aug 21, 2005 4:59:05 pm PDT #3678 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

The Other Side of this Mountain

Wherever I stand on this land, there is another side. Every other side is inhabited, ghosts and memory, unrealised wishes.

East, there's all of America; Chicago, Boston, shows in upstate New York, at the Garden, in clubs. Beyond that, the Atlantic, England: your roots, my escape that wasn't.

West, there's the Pacific, remembering how your English skin disliked the Hawaiian sun.

South is LA, where you ran from me after I ran from you.

North, Marin - Mt. Tamalpais, our house tucked under the mountain's back shoulder.

Someday, maybe, I'll figure out where on the other side I lost my courage.


SailAweigh - Aug 21, 2005 5:07:53 pm PDT #3679 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Wow, deb, that is quite haunting. Lovely.


Fay - Aug 22, 2005 6:25:26 am PDT #3680 of 10001
"Fuck Western ideologically-motivated gender identification!" Sulu gasped, and came.

The Other Side

On the other side of the door, a man may be waiting for her.

If she pushes the door, one of three things will happen:

They will become lovers, laughing at his outrageous chat-up line.

She will realise he is mad as a march hare, and will leave, red-faced.

She will have to acknowledge this is not about sex at all; that she is changing into something terrifying and unknowable, and the night bristles with unseen angels and monsters only he can explain.

Her fingers tighten on the handle. She feels the metal start to bend.

She pushes the door.


deborah grabien - Aug 22, 2005 6:55:58 am PDT #3681 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Her fingers tighten on the handle. She feels the metal start to bend.

And there's your story core, right there. My kind of writing. Dayumn, Fay.


erikaj - Aug 22, 2005 7:03:24 am PDT #3682 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

wrod.


Astarte - Aug 22, 2005 12:39:51 pm PDT #3683 of 10001
Not having has never been the thing I've regretted most in my life. Not trying is.

Beautiful, Fay.

Here's mine for this week:

One Way Out

She looked around at the floor that had taken forever last spring-days too nice to be cooped up all weekend. Nice little cocoon.

She could pretend that he had only gone out to get some more paint. Well, except for the blood and the unfinished wallpaper project with its pock-marked patches. Stay in the cocoon, a little bit drunk, and a little bit numb. Only stirring to open up another bottle of wine they’d planned on sharing someday. After the baby was born.

The baby. There was a definite time limit on this cocoon. And a lonely life-yet never alone- on the other side.