Willow: Yes. Hi. You must be Angel's handsome, yet androgynous, son. Connor: It's Connor. Willow: And the sneer's genetic. Who knew?

'A Hole in the World'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Topic!Cindy - Aug 12, 2005 9:11:43 am PDT #3582 of 10001
What is even happening?

FWIW, the "forgettin'" would drive this ex-Southerner crazy--partly because it distracts my eye and slows down the reading process, and partly because I still drop about 50% of my G's, but no one would ever write me with misspelled dialogue because my accent and diction code to Well-Educated Coastal-Dwelling Urban White American.

Is this true, even if the writer uses other um...I don't know what to call it...

In dialogue, I would totally have a character (any character--not just Southern) say, "Gonna" for "going to", because that's what people say. I would use contractions like "should've" which, in narration, I would only render as "should have".

eta...

I would also have a Northerner use "forgettin'" if it was a word he would say. That wasn't exclusive to Southerners--I just couldn't think of another analogous example.


erikaj - Aug 12, 2005 9:13:30 am PDT #3583 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

I run into that all the time writing Wire fic because half the characters are dealers and speak street slang, like a lot. And I'm a white girl that grew up in the suburbs, and used to get embarrassed typing "motherfucker"(NSM, anymore) But I like those guys and like how they talk. I want them to sound like them, but I know that some of the choices I might make might look like they have negative racial overtones. I don't want to make fun of them.


Susan W. - Aug 12, 2005 9:20:22 am PDT #3584 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

I use contractions all the time in dialogue, and often in narration, but that's not the same as misspellings. I don't think I've ever replaced "going to" with "gonna," but it'd stick out like a sore thumb in a historical.

But I'm still against misspelled dialogue on the whole, because it slows me down and makes me think about the fact that I'm reading rather than the characters and the story events, if that makes any sense. But it depends on your style and the kind of story you want to tell, too. And while I may wish that I could make my preferences into rules, I know I can't.


Anne W. - Aug 12, 2005 9:34:41 am PDT #3585 of 10001
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

I use a particular style for my English characters, but that doesn't really qualify as patois; it's more the way individual characters use the King's (or, in Ringan's case, John Knox's) English.

I see exactly what you mean. If I were to write a character from New England (specifically, Cape Cod), I wouldn't try to spell out the magical migrating "R" to convey locale. I'd try to rely on things like "go get me a couple cans of tuna from down cellar" or "don't touch them boxes neither" to get across the local flavor.


Topic!Cindy - Aug 12, 2005 9:35:31 am PDT #3586 of 10001
What is even happening?

"don't touch them boxes neither" to get across the local flavor.
Um?


Anne W. - Aug 12, 2005 9:37:48 am PDT #3587 of 10001
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

Um?

It may just be a Cape thing, but my family there uses "neither" almost as an emphatic negative at the end of a sentence.


Topic!Cindy - Aug 12, 2005 9:48:06 am PDT #3588 of 10001
What is even happening?

Oh. It might be. It might even be a family thing, or social circle sort of thing. I was caught short by both the "neither" and the "them boxes".


Jesse - Aug 12, 2005 9:50:37 am PDT #3589 of 10001
Sometimes I trip on how happy we could be.

Can we talk regionalisms for a minute? Does anyone outside of Somerville say "So don't I" when they mean "So do I"?


ChiKat - Aug 12, 2005 9:53:37 am PDT #3590 of 10001
That man was going to shank me. Over an omelette. Two eggs and a slice of government cheese. Is that what my life is worth?

Does anyone outside of Somerville say "So don't I" when they mean "So do I"?

That's just crazy talk.


sumi - Aug 12, 2005 9:56:12 am PDT #3591 of 10001
Art Crawl!!!

I've heard that. . . but where?