Zoe: Jayne. This is something the Captain has to do for himself. Mal: No! No, it's not!

'War Stories'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Susan W. - Aug 05, 2005 6:12:20 pm PDT #3443 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

When everyone but the president signs a statement, that's essentially a board mutiny, I'd say.


Connie Neil - Aug 05, 2005 7:34:28 pm PDT #3444 of 10001
brillig

A question re: copyright.

A few years back, I did a series for my company newsletter that was a Sam Spade type spoof featuring a librarian. I found it recently, and it doesn't suck. The company newsletter was put together by one of the supervisors, then Xeroxed off and handed around. I have no idea if it ever left the building. Question: Does that count as first publication? I'm thinking it might be fun to try and get the thing printed in one of the library journals.

Secondly: The hero's name is the same as a previous incarnation of the company (Marc Link, Marc from MARC Formatting rules for libraries). It's a great Sam Spadeish name, and I'd check with the boss to see if he minded seeing an old company name appearing in a story in a national magazine. Does it seem like a bad idea to keep that name or should I find something else? Marc Twain is too obvious.


deborah grabien - Aug 05, 2005 7:39:10 pm PDT #3445 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Connie, copyright law as I remember it is pretty muddy, but if the boss is still around to be checked with, you can solve any potential problems before they ever show up, by writing up a release and getting him to sign it.


P.M. Marc - Aug 05, 2005 7:46:01 pm PDT #3446 of 10001
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear

Hey, Susan--your characters spammed me! Actual subject line: Lucy and Anna crave to meet you reckon

I laughed, and felt the need to share.


deborah grabien - Aug 05, 2005 7:52:17 pm PDT #3447 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

I laughed, and felt the need to share.

I laughed with you, darlin'. Especially since I got the Best Spam-sender Name Ever.

I really challenge anyone to top Viagra spam from Rogerme C. Malfoy.


deborah grabien - Aug 05, 2005 8:09:40 pm PDT #3448 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Meep.

I've been so deep into the new series I hadn't googled on Matty Groves in nearly a month.

So, Harriet Klausner's review is out (she gives it a full ten of ten and recs it: also a long story recap, ending quite nicely with "The investigation to learn the facts about what happened to Lady Susanna is a journey through historical forensic records and it is fascinating to see the pieces come together. Deborah Grabien has written a great mystery wrapped around a terrifying ghost story.")

And, Kirkus is reviewing it in the 15th August issue.

Meep.

I wonder when the Publishers Weekly review is due?

Meep.


Susan W. - Aug 05, 2005 8:11:56 pm PDT #3449 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

Hey, Susan--your characters spammed me! Actual subject line: Lucy and Anna crave to meet you reckon

Bwah!


Susan W. - Aug 06, 2005 10:04:27 am PDT #3450 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

Huh. My scene for my online critique group this week was an action one, and I tend to assume that all of my action scenes suck. I'm just a dialogue writer struggling through the other stuff because for some reason the plot bunnies visiting me these days all involve men in uniform, waiting for the next excuse to let my people talk for 10-20 pages.

So one of my CPs just emailed to say that the scene was "AMAZING" (capslock hers), at that this kind of action scene was really my forte.

Huh. I really was sure it sucked. Maybe my plot bunnies are visiting the right person after all.


Susan W. - Aug 06, 2005 10:06:38 am PDT #3451 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

Oh, and the same CP said one of my secondary characters reminded her of Vanessa from SFU--I've never watched the show, so what's this Vanessa person like? The character in question is practical with a side of ruthless.


Sassy - Aug 06, 2005 10:14:31 am PDT #3452 of 10001
'Til we dance away...

I'm making my way through SFU right now and I've just started the third season, so I'm sure someone else can be more helpful. She really wants nice things and is kind of a nag. In some ways she's a bit of a Lady MacBeth type- she will encourage her husband to screw over his bosses if it will help her financially. That said, she does it because she wants her family to be happy and secure, I assume.