Well, it's just good to know that when the chips are down and things look grim you'll feed off the girl who loves you to save your own ass!

Xander ,'Chosen'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


DebetEsse - Jul 06, 2005 10:07:21 pm PDT #3050 of 10001
Woe to the fucking wicked.

Most of the killing during anyone's childhood is for royally stupid reasons, Debet. There are remarkably few non-stupid reasons for this ridiculous species of ours to shed each others' blood.

Yeah.

If I'd had another few dozen words, something about drugs and sneakers would have made it in there. I'm sure there's a better way to say it...something about not even having the pretense of...something.


Topic!Cindy - Jul 07, 2005 12:52:50 am PDT #3051 of 10001
What is even happening?

Hubby-To-Be looks nauseous. "I thought blood didn't bother you," I say woozily.
"It does when it's mine."
Connie, this is gorgeous.

Susan, I'm so happy for you! Yay!

Debet, that is a great piece. The Ryan White line sells it, right off.


deborah grabien - Jul 07, 2005 6:31:59 am PDT #3052 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Speaking of stupid reasons to kill people, everyone I know in London is okay.

edit: and erika, the police procedural lost its creator today; Evan Hunter died. Goodnight, Ed McBain....


Topic!Cindy - Jul 07, 2005 7:09:26 am PDT #3053 of 10001
What is even happening?

Deb, I'm glad to hear your Londoners are okay. After I lined up my Bronzers, I shot to RozK's journal, and was so glad to see she'd posted.


Strix - Jul 07, 2005 7:27:15 am PDT #3054 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger

I wondered about your peeps, Deb. Good to know.


§ ita § - Jul 07, 2005 7:36:36 am PDT #3055 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

She wants to pull her knees into her chest, but she's tried that before. She needs the cold tile against the small of her back and thighs. It's all that links her body to the outside world, the only thing other than the pain.

She matches her breath to the pain's rhythm and tries to slow her heart rate. Hopefully the painkillers will kick in before she runs out of cool floor in the bathroom.

"At least you're not pregnant, right?"

She doesn't look up. He'll pay for the flip tone. Just not right now. Maybe in a couple days.


Strix - Jul 07, 2005 7:43:10 am PDT #3056 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger

ita! Damn, your next one should be her ripping his nuts off -- slowly -- for saying that.


erikaj - Jul 07, 2005 8:02:10 am PDT #3057 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Aw, man, Deb. I'd not read many of his books, but we who are fans and writers in that genre-ette owe him a big debt. I lift a virtual glass and send him some virtual bagpipes...he wrote till practically the last second, which I think is very cool. Susan, congrats! The death thing: I remember being very confused when my mother called 1968 "the year we lost everybody" because I was very young and didn't get that the "we" was, like, Woodstock Nation, not some giant familial disaster. Not long after that, John Lennon was shot. If my mom talks about Bobby, there's still just the one.


Lilty Cash - Jul 07, 2005 8:09:32 am PDT #3058 of 10001
"You see? THAT's what they want. Love, and a bit with a dog."

My mom was a huge McBain fan- she'd read all of his 86th(?) precinct books. I emailed her to tell her and she said she hadn't read it anywhere yet, and how did I know? I told her Buffistas are better than a news wire.


erikaj - Jul 07, 2005 8:32:40 am PDT #3059 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Your mom's a crime junkie, too? Mine is very impressed by my ability to look at crime scene photos in Practical Homicide Investigation I tell her it's all her fault...Wambaugh in utero and all. (And thank God, one can't smell a photo.)