I get confused. I remember everything. I remember too much, and... some of it's made up, and... some of it can't be quantified, and... there's secrets.

River ,'Safe'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


sfmarty - Jun 13, 2005 7:03:45 am PDT #2686 of 10001
Who? moi??

I carry the little 3" x 5" notebooks for random thoughts, addresses of people I meet, records of how much a trinket cost (for customs), odds and ends. Also if I am traveling with someone and sharing expenses, how much each of has spent for dual things, like meals, lodging, etc.

These little memory joggers are wonderful years later. Also money conversions. I find out how much the currency is worth in my familiar money (dollars) so I can bargain or shop. On Oct 1, lordy knows what year, the British pound was worth 1.473 dollars. 35 pounds was $51.56.


deborah grabien - Jun 13, 2005 7:04:16 am PDT #2687 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Remembering the paper fixations from school during the first nine years of my life (pre-USA), and shuddering. I thought I'd been unlucky about the fixations on size and weight...

Teppy! New topic?


Nutty - Jun 13, 2005 7:11:22 am PDT #2688 of 10001
"Mister Spock is on his fanny, sir. Reports heavy damage."

graph paper

Yes, that is what I meant. I don't think all notebook paper is like this, but it seemed like much more of it was than wasn't.

(Until last year, my permanent currency conversion was 1 pound = $1.50, more or less. Last year, I discovered that it's more like $1.85, which was depressing.)


Steph L. - Jun 13, 2005 7:13:15 am PDT #2689 of 10001
Unusually and exceedingly peculiar and altogether quite impossible to describe

Topic topic topic....

Challenge #61 (two people in a small space; written [or not] in a genre) is now closed.

Challenge #62 comes from a confluence of little things that inspired me, including the "easy listening" radio station that's on in the office, as well as a note on my computer reminding me to listen to Fresh Air this afternoon, to hear Christian Bale talk about being Batman.

Anyway. Challenge #62 is the air we breathe.

Go for it.


Connie Neil - Jun 13, 2005 7:53:31 am PDT #2690 of 10001
brillig

drabbling

There's less of it now than where I grew up. I'm near a mile high here (Denver's not that unique). I thought I'd die those first few months, sea-level lungs wringing air out of an attenuated atmosphere.

I went home later. My mother looked over at me. "Are you breathing?"

"Of course I'm breathing, why?"

"I can't tell."

"Mountain people, you know. We get down in this lowland soup and we only have to breathe every other minute."

I ran up some stairs without breathing hard. It was nice.


deborah grabien - Jun 13, 2005 7:54:32 am PDT #2691 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Heh.

Kiss

I know what power is.

It's what happens when we're face to face, eyes narrowed, pupils dilated, because, for each of us, the other blocks out the rest of the world.

It's what happens when one of us breathes, lips parted slightly, soft air, the treasure stored in lung and throat, moving into the confinement of that narrow highway, that slender unmarked road between my lips and yours.

It's what happens when one of us lifts a hand, stirring the air, generating energy, power -breath, lung to throat to lip.

Have I mentioned that you are the air I breathe?


deborah grabien - Jun 13, 2005 8:04:35 am PDT #2692 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

OK, I'm giggling like a sicko, here. My WIP readers for R&RNF will appreciate why this is funny.

From my agent just now:

I've got a couple things coming in under deadlines right now so I'm not sure when I'll be able to get you feedback on the portion I have. Ergo, I might recommend getting a couple of your first readers to give you feedback if you finish it before I get that far and then getting me a manuscript incorporating any revisions inspired by their comments to assess for marketing.... That sound okay by you?

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!

Ahem. Erm. Um...

Oh, and I just got contract for publication of the apocalyptic clowns story. Token payment, which is fine - this was way more a "foot in the door" submission, and I'm in some heavy-hitting company, in a genre in which I rarely write. So, yay me.


Connie Neil - Jun 13, 2005 8:06:00 am PDT #2693 of 10001
brillig

If I'm reading that right, deb, your editor trusts us (an Imperial-ish us) to tell you what works? That's very flattering.


Steph L. - Jun 13, 2005 8:06:40 am PDT #2694 of 10001
Unusually and exceedingly peculiar and altogether quite impossible to describe

I might recommend getting a couple of your first readers to give you feedback if you finish it before I get that far and then getting me a manuscript incorporating any revisions inspired by their comments to assess for marketing....

Heh. Heh heh heh.


deborah grabien - Jun 13, 2005 8:28:45 am PDT #2695 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

connie, yep - but the core of that is that she trusts me to be able to weigh the feedback and use what I need. Also, to pick WIP readers in the first place. (edit: and not my editor - this is my agent, Jennifer Jackson at DMLA)

What's hilarious is the suggestion that I get feedback. muHA!

What I wrote back, in part:

I've had 32 WIP readers on this one, and they've been getting chapters as I write them. I've been going back and assessing and incorporating as I receive feedback. The feedback on this has been a steady constant stream, with - scarily - virtually no disagreement between the WIP readers.

Once this one's done, I think it'll be close to ready to ship. And I've already got a synopsis.

I know, I know. Ruth's complaint: I write too fast.