Mal: You tell me right now, little Kaylee, you really think you can do this? Kaylee: Sure. Yeah. I think so. 'Sides, if I mess up, not like you'll be able to yell at me.

'Bushwhacked'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


dcp - May 23, 2005 11:34:57 am PDT #2292 of 10001
The more I learn, the more I realize how little I know.

Drabble:

Speed whistles past the canopy and trembles in the controls as we cruise toward the next turnpoint. A dip of the wing first one way, then the other, hints at the lift we are passing by. A pulsing buzz from the instrument panel coaches, "A little faster...now slower...." The unwinding altimeter feeds that little knot of fear that we'll have to land in some farmer's field, while the sight of distance made good tries to reassure us that it was height well spent.

A kick in the pants tells us we've found the next good thermal, just in time. We circle, and climb, and dance the dance again.


Steph L. - May 23, 2005 11:38:24 am PDT #2293 of 10001
the hardest to learn / was the least complicated

Connie, that officially freaked my shit out.

It's sad that I'm tempted to write an entire drabble in 1337-speak, isn't it?

Try it, and I KEEL YOU!!!


Connie Neil - May 23, 2005 11:47:29 am PDT #2294 of 10001
brillig

Connie, that officially freaked my shit out.

Sorry. Somehow he always knows when it's me touching him.


Polter-Cow - May 23, 2005 12:13:16 pm PDT #2295 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

Try it, and I KEEL YOU!!!

w00t w00t that would r0x0r!!!1


Gris - May 23, 2005 12:20:20 pm PDT #2296 of 10001
Hey. New board.

Oh, it'll happen. I just need inspiration. I'm thinking of going and reading the forums for something like World of Warcraft for a while, only I'm pretty sure I don't want brains on my computer monitor.


Anne W. - May 23, 2005 12:21:39 pm PDT #2297 of 10001
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

I'm pretty sure I don't want brains on my computer monitor.

Your brains or someone else's?


Gris - May 23, 2005 12:22:55 pm PDT #2298 of 10001
Hey. New board.

Mine. Gamers make my head go 'splodey.


deborah grabien - May 23, 2005 12:29:16 pm PDT #2299 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Was any of that in English?

I mean, what's D. talking about?


Gris - May 23, 2005 12:34:33 pm PDT #2300 of 10001
Hey. New board.

Heh. Sorry, deb, probably not a world you have to deal with.

"1337-speak" is this terrible, terrible, TERRIBLE tradition invented by people who play lots of video games and/or hack computers maliciously, and thus think they are cool. They have this tendency to talk in numbers instead of letters: for example, the number series "1337" is a replacement for "leet" (because 1's kind of look like l's, and 3's kind of look like e's, and 7's kind of look like t's) which is itself a bastardization of "elite." Similar things are "h4X0r" for "hacker" and "r0X0r" for "rocks." For example, you might say "1 4m 4 1337 h4x0r! 1 r0x0r!"

Of course, this tradition was so infuriatingly stupid that eventually it became uncool, and is now mocked more than it is spoken in seriousness. But even the mocking of it is annoying. Which is why I probably won't actually make the drabble. It was, however, the first thing that popped into my head when I heard "communicate without words" which is a sign that I seriously need to give the computer a break.


§ ita § - May 23, 2005 12:41:52 pm PDT #2301 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

His shoulder dips and there’s a beat before the kick launches. His feet are light and relaxed, but there’s a hitch as his shoulder moves – his right is stiffening up again.

She smiles. He sees this, and doesn’t know why. She forgets he’ll react to this, but smiles a little more as he tenses.

He doesn’t have the room to think fondly and fight. He will, though. He’s good. Caught up in her and his attraction he strains to impress, but she never fights harder than to teach him his next lesson.

Learning to lose is also on the curriculum.