Kaylee: H-how did you... g-get on...? Early: Strains the mind a bit, don't it? You think you're all alone. Maybe I come down the chimney, Kaylee. Bring presents to the good girls and boys.

'Objects In Space'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Connie Neil - May 17, 2005 10:52:51 am PDT #2184 of 10001
brillig

more shadows

The nights are getting brighter here. Spotlights at the 7-11 on the corner. Stuttering street lights on every other block. Paranoid security lights that flash "How dare you walk here!" as I pass by.

I walk home from the 7-11, wincing at the halogen headlights that morons like to kick to Bright at pedestrians. I gratefully turn my house corner, which blocks all the lights.

My sharp-edged shadow lies on the sidewalk in front of me. I smile, turn, and look up.

"Hello, moon."


deborah grabien - May 17, 2005 2:40:47 pm PDT #2185 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

connie, that's a charmer.

I'm buried in publishing silliness. At least, not silliness, just surrealism. Will be back to form when things handled.


Susan W. - May 18, 2005 12:10:05 pm PDT #2186 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

I've decided that when I'm published and therefore have enough credentials that anyone will pay attention to me, the workshop I give at writers meetings and conferences will be on the usefulness of adverbs, forms of "to be," and the past perfect tense. Because I am officialLY tired of people telling new writers they are bad things, which new writers interpret as meaning they must avoid them at all costs.


Connie Neil - May 18, 2005 12:14:14 pm PDT #2187 of 10001
brillig

Susan for Editor-in-Chief!


Susan W. - May 18, 2005 12:21:26 pm PDT #2188 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

The thing is, there's a sound principle behind all the advice. It's just not anything close to an absolute. But for some reason it's very hard to explain the nuances.


deborah grabien - May 18, 2005 12:21:39 pm PDT #2189 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

If you need a guest speaker, I'm in.

I'm especially fierce in defense of the adverb, used properly.


Susan W. - May 18, 2005 12:37:29 pm PDT #2190 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

Question--in the most recent section I took to my Monday writers group, I referred to Anna getting a stitch in her side (as in, the pain you get from walking or running past your normal limits, not a gut wound being sewn up). One of the group members circled it with a question mark. That's not some obscure Southernism, is it?


Connie Neil - May 18, 2005 12:38:54 pm PDT #2191 of 10001
brillig

I'm familiar with the usage, but apparently my home region has a lot more Southernism than I previously thought. I thought it was fairly common.


Allyson - May 18, 2005 12:41:20 pm PDT #2192 of 10001
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

That's not some obscure Southernism, is it?

I always used it as a kid. I don't know where I picked it up, but my grampa was from the midwest. Maybe he passed it down.


Topic!Cindy - May 18, 2005 12:42:22 pm PDT #2193 of 10001
What is even happening?

We used it here. My Nova Scotian grandmother (born 1906) used it, too.