No. You're missing the point. The design of the thing is functional. The plan is not to shoot you. The plan is to get the girl. If there's no girl, then the plan, well, is like the room.

Early ,'Objects In Space'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Susan W. - May 16, 2005 6:48:38 pm PDT #2172 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

Insent, Hil, with details about feedback desired.

Cindy, I'd love to send it to you, too, but I don't think I have your gmail. Should I just use your profile addy?


Connie Neil - May 16, 2005 7:22:39 pm PDT #2173 of 10001
brillig

We know it's not you, you goober (or is it...)

I'm feeling oddly (oddly, sheesh) sane today and decided for a lark to distance myself from my more homicidal urges. I'm sure I'll be back to normal in a couple of days.


Liese S. - May 16, 2005 8:48:16 pm PDT #2174 of 10001
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

deb, your drabble made me go, "Whoa." And erika, I loved them. Very powerful.

Mine is not yet shadow self. I might actually try fiction on that later, because my nano characters are still bopping around, trying to tell their story.

In Three Dimensions

It was part of falling in love. Red and blue par cans overhead cast their colored shadows on the wooden stage floor. I was hopping from foot to foot, playing with the shadows, making them dance and leap over the chairs and grand piano.

"They must be three dimensional," he mused.

"What?"

"The shadows. Look, when you move, darkness extends all the way from where you are to the stage."

We talked for hours about the nature of light and shadow, the meaning of darkness and brightness. I looked at him, delighted, and watched the reflections in his blue eyes.


Liese S. - May 16, 2005 8:51:41 pm PDT #2175 of 10001
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

I should gather up all the ones about him and show him. He thinks I never write about him, which is almost true. My songwriting, except for the fluffy anomalous (Hee, had to check the spelling on that 'cause of Numb3rs.) stuff, all comes out of pain. So he rarely makes it into that. Well, these days, anyway.


deborah grabien - May 16, 2005 9:43:22 pm PDT #2176 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

So he rarely makes it into that. Well, these days, anyway.

We were separated at birth? Just curious.

Brilliant damned drabble, too.


deborah grabien - May 16, 2005 9:53:34 pm PDT #2177 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

The Long Arms of the Dead

They say the dead travel fast.

I'll believe that; what else have they got to do? Oh - wait. There's that thing about haunting the living.

I'm living. I breathe and feel and orgasm and dream, eat too much starch when I'm annoyed, and don't eat anything when I'm heartbroken. I'm animal, not vegetable, yet I reach for sunlight, emotional photosynthesis.

They say the dead travel fast. Maybe they do. Maybe that isn't the point.

What the beloved dead do to me is to block the sun, withhold its light. Fast or slow, the dead cast a long, long shadow.


SailAweigh - May 17, 2005 2:57:47 am PDT #2178 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Oh, yeah, Deb, very...yeah.


Topic!Cindy - May 17, 2005 3:12:34 am PDT #2179 of 10001
What is even happening?

Sorry about that, Susan. I got offline. I just pinged you from my gmail.


Susan W. - May 17, 2005 5:50:10 am PDT #2180 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

Insent from my gmail, Cindy.


Topic!Cindy - May 17, 2005 6:12:57 am PDT #2181 of 10001
What is even happening?

Thank you, Susan. I got it, and replied in e, saying the same. I'm so excited to read it.