"Turns Up Missing"?
OK, that really reads oddly to me.
Lorne: Snakes? Uh-huh. And they came out of your what? Okay. Okay, well, did they get up there themselves or is this part of a, you know, a thing? No, I'm not judging...Do we fight snakes? Angel: Only if they're giant. Or demons. Or giant demons. Are they giant demon snakes? Lorne: Well, unless this guy's 30 feet tall, I'm thinking they're of the garden variety.
'Lineage'
The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...
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deborah grabien - Apr 28, 2005 8:05:24 am PDT #1490 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
erikaj - Apr 28, 2005 8:06:12 am PDT #1491 of 10001
I'm a fucking amazing catch!--Fiona Gallagher, Shameless(US)
I think your DH is a fucking genius(in the adjective sense, mind you) Susan. Also CG told me the same thing when my tank got dry once.
deborah grabien - Apr 28, 2005 8:07:40 am PDT #1492 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Susan, he's talking good basic common sense.
Steph L. - Apr 28, 2005 8:12:45 am PDT #1493 of 10001
the hardest to learn / was the least complicated
I asked him what I should do about it. His first suggestion was "breathe through your eyelids,"
Like the lava lizards of the Galapagos Islands!
deborah grabien - Apr 28, 2005 8:16:31 am PDT #1494 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
The rose goes in the front, big guy....
Teppy, may I say how much I adore the idea of a "really really bad drabble" challenge?
Topic!Cindy - Apr 28, 2005 8:17:21 am PDT #1495 of 10001
What is even happening?
I'm drawing a complete blank on what to attempt. Y'all have probably noticed I don't do the drabbles unless they suggest to me something from the wip or one of the embryonic novels. I definitely get tunnel vision.Susan, why don't you just go back through some of Teppy's challenges in this thread?
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Turn up missing sounds to me like the resolution came before the conflict. I think I would say went missing, though I would most often say, is missing.
Topic!Cindy - Apr 28, 2005 8:17:46 am PDT #1496 of 10001
What is even happening?
Like the lava lizards of the Galapagos Islands!
Bull Durham.
deborah grabien - Apr 28, 2005 8:19:32 am PDT #1497 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
"Turns up", to me, indicates "found", not "lost".
You know, I'd been wondering about doing a Cliche drabble for the cliche of "You can't always get what you want."
But no matter how I look at it, the drabble is always going to be "Well, no SHIT, Sherlock!", written out twenty five times.
Scrappy - Apr 28, 2005 8:21:02 am PDT #1498 of 10001
Life moves pretty fast. You don't stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it.
Write a description of Annabel having breakfast, with lots of detail--what the room looks like, what you are thinking about, what she says, how you feel about her--something she might like to have when she is older to get an idea what she was like and the world was like.
Susan W. - Apr 28, 2005 8:21:25 am PDT #1499 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights
Like the lava lizards of the Galapagos Islands!
Exactly!
And he knows me well. If you can't get through to me any other way, make a sports metaphor.
Susan, he's talking good basic common sense.
I know. I just like my tunnel vision. Nothing else in the world is half as interesting to me in this stage of the process than the wip, y'know?