We killed a homeless man on this bench. Me and Dru. Those were good times. You know, he begged for mercy, and you know, that only made her bite harder.

Spike ,'Sleeper'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Polter-Cow - Feb 20, 2005 8:58:54 am PST #148 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

Or light from without.


deborah grabien - Feb 20, 2005 9:08:18 am PST #149 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Reminded of one of the stupidest phrases on earth: "I saw it with my own eyes!"

Um, yes. Well now. I did rather assume that the speaker hadn't seen it with their cousin Hamish's eyes.


SailAweigh - Feb 20, 2005 9:10:44 am PST #150 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

That's like my brother's favorite detective/cop faux-pas "shot to death." You don't shoot anyone to life, do you?


deborah grabien - Feb 20, 2005 9:11:43 am PST #151 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Shot to Gehenna, maybe?

Stupid phrase. Not sure it's quite at the level of obviousness as "my own eyes", but it's definitely up there.


Polter-Cow - Feb 20, 2005 9:16:10 am PST #152 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

Reminded of one of the stupidest phrases on earth: "I saw it with my own eyes!"

I think that's a case of redundancy for effect.

That's like my brother's favorite detective/cop faux-pas "shot to death." You don't shoot anyone to life, do you?

I don't think that one is so bad. Because he could have shot him without killing him. It's like bludgeoning someone to death. Or boring someone to death.


Strix - Feb 20, 2005 9:24:52 am PST #153 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger

Hee! The thing that struck me most was the absolute monotonous nonrythym of the writing.

OTOH, erika made me snort lukewarm tea all over the cat: gave a woman like that a mercy-beta once and she complained I didn't respect her vision. Not true. I respected it like my own ability to throw javelins.

Can I tag?


erikaj - Feb 20, 2005 9:29:36 am PST #154 of 10001
I'm a fucking amazing catch!--Fiona Gallagher, Shameless(US)

Yeah! Go ahead. So glad my snottiness amuses.


Strix - Feb 20, 2005 9:34:01 am PST #155 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger

Thanks, my old tag was losing its shine.


Ginger - Feb 20, 2005 9:54:03 am PST #156 of 10001
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

In my case, Erika, it was coffee and my keyboard. It's a shame there's not an Olympics for snark.


Topic!Cindy - Feb 20, 2005 11:50:03 am PST #157 of 10001
What is even happening?

Tell me it just learned English on Thursday. The worst part is, she(?) won't want advice. I gave a woman like that a mercy-beta once and she complained I didn't respect her vision. Not true. I respected it like my own ability to throw javelins.
Damn, Erin beat me to the punch. I snorted at this, not least of all because I'm thinking of my own ability to throw javelins, and the innocent bystanders who'd certainly be injured, much like my own eyes were in trying to read the contents of deb's email.