It's because you didn't have a strong father figure isn't it?

Joyce ,'Chosen'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


deborah grabien - Apr 26, 2005 8:10:00 am PDT #1387 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

connie, these days, whenever I see someone else getting bit in the ass by an unexpected memory, I twing in empathy.


erikaj - Apr 26, 2005 8:14:45 am PDT #1388 of 10001
I'm a fucking amazing catch!--Fiona Gallagher, Shameless(US)

I still need to get started...


Connie Neil - Apr 26, 2005 8:15:33 am PDT #1389 of 10001
brillig

It's a pretty good memory, all told. That night kicked me partway out of my ignorance and isolation. People I knew could be affected by big things, it wasn't just something that happened on TV.


deborah grabien - Apr 26, 2005 8:33:00 am PDT #1390 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

All's Well That Ends Well

A mountain, a car, a long hard fall. Also, thirty seven fractured bones.

A rare form of juvenile osteoporosis; without the mountain and the car and the long hard fall, they likely don't discover it until it's irreversible, and I never walk again.

It's cancer, stage one. LEEP surgery for you tomorrow.

I come out alive, and quit smoking. The quitting is painless. I'm stronger, healthier.

Goodbye, it's over, I can't cope anymore. I'll always hate you. I'll always love you. You'll run through me forever. It won't ever not hurt. Goodbye.

All's well? Really?

Can someone please define "well"?


erikaj - Apr 26, 2005 10:11:23 am PDT #1391 of 10001
I'm a fucking amazing catch!--Fiona Gallagher, Shameless(US)

Not the best writing of my life, but Hope Springs Eternal
I don’t know why I bother sometimes. Messing with this face, this body, seems the original “silk purse out of a sow’s ear” situation, but I can’t let my hair just flop like a cave woman’s, and mom’s got the good scissors out and unearthed my untended makeup. I feel more like myself when the air hits my neck, smart and ready to take on life. I’ve left my doubts in a fuzzy pile on the floor.Making up re-introduces me to a woman I don’t quite recognize, like running into someone from high school in the grocery store. I know I know her, but I can’t quite remember how, and she never used to have lips like that.


deborah grabien - Apr 26, 2005 10:22:56 am PDT #1392 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

erika, that piece is - okay, yes, the last two lines of that - no, the last three lines - anyway. Damn. Yes.


Susan W. - Apr 26, 2005 10:24:42 am PDT #1393 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

I love it, erika.


erikaj - Apr 26, 2005 10:24:47 am PDT #1394 of 10001
I'm a fucking amazing catch!--Fiona Gallagher, Shameless(US)

Really? Thank you.


Beverly - Apr 26, 2005 10:25:43 am PDT #1395 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

erika, I agree about the last three lines--perfect, and pretty darn universal, I'd say.


deborah grabien - Apr 26, 2005 10:26:02 am PDT #1396 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

It's fucking kickass.

Oh, man. I do the lip thing too much these days, but in reverse: didn't mine use to be full? Where the hell did this saggy stuff come from?

Damn. erika broke me.