Mmm. Wife soup. I must've done good.

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The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Topic!Cindy - Apr 24, 2005 8:15:26 am PDT #1316 of 10001
What is even happening?

You'll notice he mentioned not thinking about it as he wrote it; he felt it. His cerebrality (that can't possibly be a word, can it?) is automatic, and goes into gear when he's putting the words together to scan, to make sense, to follow a line that can be set to music. But the passion isn't parsed as he's doing it.

I smiled and said to myself, "Hello, deb" as he was speaking about it.


sfmarty - Apr 24, 2005 8:18:25 am PDT #1317 of 10001
Who? moi??

Deb, you could talk about song writing.


deborah grabien - Apr 24, 2005 8:31:00 am PDT #1318 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

I smiled and said to myself, "Hello, deb" as he was speaking about it.

Cindy, you just put me into some stellar company, there.

Mart, if we pull the cash together and can do this, I'll likely suggest taking a session with the teenagers in the group and having a round robin on creativity: basically a short talk and then, ok, I'm going to start with "once upon a time" and begin a spoken story. Then, after a few sentences, pass it along to the kid at my left and say, your turn: embellish this, take the story down the road, add characters of your own, hang a hard left or start scrambling over a mountain, you have two minutes, then on to the person next to you. Let's see what we can write here, with no prior confab. And for heaven's sake, don't consider it too much, what you're going to add - spend that mental energy listening to what comes before, so you know the terrain under these characters' shoes.

It's pure storytelling.


erikaj - Apr 24, 2005 8:53:01 am PDT #1319 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Dang, I wish I had seen that. Bruce got my puberty started. We go back a ways. And I love the way he writes...more now that I'm older and less inclined to turn off "Nebraska" for being a downer.(Still a downer, but now? Part of its charm.)


deborah grabien - Apr 24, 2005 9:00:34 am PDT #1320 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

erika, the real downer, I think, is "Tom Joad". Could it get any bleaker?

Also, they're reshowing it at least twice this week. If you get VH1, check your listings.


erikaj - Apr 24, 2005 9:04:52 am PDT #1321 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Yeah, but bonus points for the allusion....I've always liked the brainy ones. But, yeah... We definitely get it...the last ST I saw were those twirpy"Green Day" guys...definitely a "You're making our side look stupid. Get off our side." moment for me.


deborah grabien - Apr 24, 2005 9:08:56 am PDT #1322 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

I've always liked the brainy ones

Haven't we all? I'm not saying the Guidos don't have their uses and their place (the family name for a construction worker-style one-night chewtoy), but give me heart and mind every time.

And when it writes like Springsteen?

Glhglhglhglhglh.....


deborah grabien - Apr 24, 2005 9:09:51 am PDT #1323 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

"You're making our side look stupid. Get off our side."

At last, we disagree on something - I think it's a first. I have the "American Idiot" love at warp eleven, I do.


erikaj - Apr 24, 2005 9:23:34 am PDT #1324 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

I think it is not the songs but the between patter that got to me.I forget why. Stupid, huh?(But that won't stop me from holding some random grudge, because I'm petty like that.) Never mind, if I'm in the wrong mood,"Have a good day," can make me think it's none of their fucking business what day I have.


deborah grabien - Apr 24, 2005 9:27:12 am PDT #1325 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Heh. Yes, indeed, if the patter rubs wrong, the whole "urge. to. kill. RISING" thing can kick in pretty hard. I get that way about Sting.