Mal: How come you didn't turn on me, Jayne? Jayne: Money wasn't good enough. Mal: What happens when it is? Jayne: Well... that'll be an interesting day.

'Serenity'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


deborah grabien - Apr 19, 2005 4:46:58 pm PDT #1245 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

erika, I vaguely remember that - I need to reread.

Amy, WOOT!


erikaj - Apr 19, 2005 4:53:22 pm PDT #1246 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

It's sick, but cracked my shit up.


askye - Apr 19, 2005 5:59:30 pm PDT #1247 of 10001
Thrive to spite them

I haven't been writing much but Discovery inspired me. There have been a lot of discoveries for me recently, but this was one of the more interesting ones.

I’m sitting on the couch in my apartment. Last time I was here it was all a chaotic mess: a tangle of clothes and books and trash and unopened mail obscured the floor. Emotions and thoughts careened, twisted, spilled out all over me.

Now there is stillness and the room feels hollow. There’s something I can’t place and the thought rattles around in my head like dice in a cup.

The thought. One thought.

There’s one thought in my head.

Which means my meds must be working. I must be closer to “normal”.

Dear God this is boring.


SailAweigh - Apr 19, 2005 6:06:05 pm PDT #1248 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

askye, that's marvelous.


deborah grabien - Apr 20, 2005 7:56:00 am PDT #1249 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Oh, man. askye, those last two lines...


erikaj - Apr 20, 2005 8:22:44 am PDT #1250 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

wrod.


askye - Apr 20, 2005 5:35:18 pm PDT #1251 of 10001
Thrive to spite them

Thanks!


deborah grabien - Apr 21, 2005 2:09:08 pm PDT #1252 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Someone else's discovery, long ago. Ah, the redemptive power of multiple orgasms...

Nature's Consolation Prize

"Did you just -"

"Uh-huh." I'm breathless, arching, relaxing. "Uh-huh. Whatever you did, could you do that again?"

He obliges. There's an odd look on his face - awe? Bemusement? Another one: Lather, rinse, repeat.

"Right." The brown eyes are saucer-wide and there's a charming grin forming. "Bloody hell. What's that, then? Nine? Ten?"

"I wasn't counting. But I think way more than that. Do that again, please. It feels yummy."

"Let's wait a minute, love, all right?" He's beaming like a searchlight.

"Why?"

"Because men can't do this, and it's brilliant to watch." He touches me. "And you're bloody lovely."


SailAweigh - Apr 21, 2005 2:11:54 pm PDT #1253 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

That, deb, is just too. cool.


erikaj - Apr 21, 2005 2:12:11 pm PDT #1254 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

That was great, Deb.