Zoe: My man would never fall for that. Wash: Most of my head wishes I had.

'Our Mrs. Reynolds'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Sophie Max - Apr 17, 2005 4:55:56 pm PDT #1164 of 10001

Loving all the drabbles. Liese, that one was - ouch. I hope it helped you to write it out - I know it helps me.

I must confess, this entry was inspired by Amy's - in a sort of "exact opposite" kind of way.

One Year Contract

It was a one year contract. She would go to this tiny Northern town and exist for one year only, take the job for the money and the experience and then move back to the real world, the big city, where real people lived.

Except the summer nights were so long and light and had colours she had never seen before. She had not known rocks and water could be both harsh and haunting. The snow-covered landscape seen from the sky was foreign, but comforting. The winter nights were cold and long, but lit with magical hues dancing in the sky.

It was the realest place she had ever been. Eight years later, she is not sure she will ever leave.


Susan W. - Apr 17, 2005 8:33:04 pm PDT #1165 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

Squeezing one in under the wire.....

June 30, 1812

The sage green dress brings out her eyes. Simple, high-necked, and long-sleeved, it’s only a morning dress. But not a mourning dress. At last.

One year. Passion and joy, a parting that broke her. Blood on her hands and a near-brush with death. A son whose origins she’ll conceal, so she can keep him by her and give him everything.

If she dreams nightly, if she doesn’t know which are worse, the nightmares or the ones that leave her shaking with need and raging at the emptiness of her bed, what of it? The year is over, and her life is before her.


Ailleann - Apr 17, 2005 9:07:30 pm PDT #1166 of 10001
vanguard of the socialist Hollywood liberal homosexualist agenda

Liese, you broke me. Everyone else is wonderful too. These drabbles are like little nuggets of gold.... or, around here, more like diamonds in the tiara!

Count me on the back of the topic train... I was bound and determined to not write something that was All About Me, and it took all week to find something else...


365 days, and just as many souls condemned. Every night, gentlemen request her services, and she makes her mark on the corner of a twenty. A tiny rubber stamp, a circle with “Cambios Andrea” and a dollar sign inside. She suggests a quiet drink, friendly place just around the corner. She picks up the check with his death warrant, and the bartender notes his face, the cut of his overcoat. Late that night, his final reward will come in a dark alley at knifepoint. He’s never found. You were hers only once, and she never bothered to know your name.


deborah grabien - Apr 18, 2005 6:39:39 am PDT #1167 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Ailleann, that was stone solid brilliant. Dayum.

And that's right, new topic day. After Teppy recovers from our bigass party in Cleveland this weekend...


Aims - Apr 18, 2005 6:58:41 am PDT #1168 of 10001
Shit's all sorts of different now.

Hi guys, sorry to interrupt, but I just wanted to let Deb know I shot her am email.

t tiptoes back out


Steph L. - Apr 18, 2005 7:18:23 am PDT #1169 of 10001
the hardest to learn / was the least complicated

Monday means new drabble time!

Challenge #53 (one year) is now closed.

Challenge #54 is, in honor of this past weekend, discovery.

Go for it.


deborah grabien - Apr 18, 2005 7:27:14 am PDT #1170 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Oh, Teppy. Wow. Manoman. OK.

The Hall, #1

I walked into the Hall of Fame, looking for something of him. Hell, he's woven through so much music that he deserves visibility. Without him, the best of the Rolling Stones, the Who, Quicksilver - that music wouldn't exist today, and then where's your museum?

I caught only snatches, distant echoes, mirrored like the neon of the displays facing one another.

Before we left, my friend asked me: Did you see Nicky's coat?

I almost missed it. It was hanging behind a tacky thing Mick wore in 1972. Almost obscured - a wry irony, there.

I found him. I found me, too.


Steph L. - Apr 18, 2005 7:28:49 am PDT #1171 of 10001
the hardest to learn / was the least complicated

Deb, that's the reason for the topic. Very specifically. Driving home yesterday, I knew it had to be the topic.


Nutty - Apr 18, 2005 7:48:27 am PDT #1172 of 10001
"Mister Spock is on his fanny, sir. Reports heavy damage."

Discovery, huh? Okay. Note: the game is in the 4th inning as we speak. (9-2, pitcher at 81 pitches with 1ER, 1BB, 1HBP, and 7Ks.)

**

I was awake -- the time difference. The Beast wagged and wagged, goggling around the kitchen, eager with dribble. She dropped the Chronicle on the table and asked me if tea was all right.

Later that day, we would be dressed up; I had a pin with purple feathers on it and rhinestone barrettes. We would stand in the late sun in front of the church, chatting and laughing all in our bright colors, while bride and groom posed somewhere, tissues just out of camera range. Toasts, gourmet hors d'oevres, brightly-colored linens and lubricated conversation. My cheeks hurt with laughing, the men sweating through their tuxedo shirts to jazzy, obscure pop mixes. I chatted bossa nova and the modern Spanish novel, pleasantly drunk.

But that morning, she bustled back into the kitchen from I don't know where, set down tea at my elbow. "What are you reading?" she asked.

"Box score," I said. "Just checking how the team did."

She laughed. I looked up, startled, and laughed with her. "I had no idea the addiction was so serious," she said.


deborah grabien - Apr 18, 2005 7:50:44 am PDT #1173 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Nutty, I love that "eager with dribble" line.

Teppy, I was actually going to suggest discovery. This weekend was iconic.