Angel's lame. His hair goes straight up, and he's bloody stupid!

Buffybot ,'Dirty Girls'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


deborah grabien - Apr 05, 2005 8:58:45 am PDT #1077 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Genovese! Yes. And ita, I think Tawana was Brawley, not Bradley. My memory is a strange and wondrous thing.

I can't imagine NOT helping if someone is screaming in the street. We check things out, every damned time.


Nutty - Apr 05, 2005 9:03:05 am PDT #1078 of 10001
"Mister Spock is on his fanny, sir. Reports heavy damage."

BTW, the "duh, I thought YOU were going to do something" scenario you all are describing is called the Bystander Effect. The more bystanders there are, the lower each bystander feels is his/her responsibility.


§ ita § - Apr 05, 2005 9:08:14 am PDT #1079 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

Yeah, Brawley. Brain fart.


deborah grabien - Apr 05, 2005 9:19:26 am PDT #1080 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

For Photo #10

Bloodstains

It wasn't malice. Kathy wanted her wedding held in the little church in Kew Gardens. She wouldn't take no, and Tony backed her up, the way he always did, so the wedding was in Queens.

My mother hated it. She had good reasons to hate it, remembering that night, the Genovese girl screaming outside, my mother pulling down the shade, staying clear.

Ghosts.

She nearly refused to come to the wedding, but of course she was afraid people would talk.

Where we're standing? Right where Kitty died. I wonder if my mother sees invisible bloodstains, on her shoes, on her hands?


Topic!Cindy - Apr 05, 2005 10:23:09 am PDT #1081 of 10001
What is even happening?

BTW, the "duh, I thought YOU were going to do something" scenario you all are describing is called the Bystander Effect. The more bystanders there are, the lower each bystander feels is his/her responsibility.
Bless you, Nutty. I've been trying to remember that. All day.


erikaj - Apr 05, 2005 11:18:52 am PDT #1082 of 10001
I'm a fucking amazing catch!--Fiona Gallagher, Shameless(US)

The same picture Deb used, here: [link] I don’t know who my mother thinks she’s fooling with that dye job...nobody’s hair is really platinum. And her smile’s so fake, like I don’t know she’s Been Crying Her Eyes Out for weeks. She cries and I puke cause I’m knocked up....I would’ve married Bobby anyways, probably, but it’s not been...what-do-you-call it a glamorous engagement. But I’m not showing yet, at least. We love each other, right? Smart girls have babies too, right? Maybe Ma will make a good nonna after all. Congratulations to me.


deborah grabien - Apr 05, 2005 11:42:44 am PDT #1083 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Whoa.

erika, that one - dudesse, yep. Fake stiff smile, let the viewer figure out whether it's smug, or terrified, or psychotic, or conscience-stricken.

Or of course, in the two-parter Amy wrote? In complete denial.


erikaj - Apr 05, 2005 11:47:38 am PDT #1084 of 10001
I'm a fucking amazing catch!--Fiona Gallagher, Shameless(US)

The young girl is trying so hard to look like she's Okay, but she's freaked, I can tell. There are probably photos of me like that.


Amy - Apr 05, 2005 12:01:42 pm PDT #1085 of 10001
Because books.

The poor woman in that photo is being completely skewered, isn't she?

I wrote the two-parter because, at first, the girl in Photo 10 looked like the little one in the tutu, and when I checked, the same person had contributed both photos, so I'm pretty sure it *is* her, about fourteen years later. Weird.

erika, I loved yours.

Sail, the one you did for Photo 5 rocked hard -- razor sharp.

Tep, your was perfect -- the "constant trickle of fruity drinks" and the sense of bittersweet nostalgia. Lovely.

And welcome, Aillean! You drabble beautifully. Hope you're sticking around.


erikaj - Apr 05, 2005 12:10:38 pm PDT #1086 of 10001
I'm a fucking amazing catch!--Fiona Gallagher, Shameless(US)

I don't think she's a horrible person, just that she and the girl are probably nsm getting along. There are photos of my mom and my grandfather like that...probably make some murderous drabbles, but grandma was an obsessive shutterbug and caught them in mid-fight many times.