Mal: Then I call it a win. What's the problem? Inara: Should I start with the part where you're stranded in the middle of nowhere, or the part where you have no clothes?

'Trash'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


deborah grabien - Feb 19, 2005 6:30:47 am PST #102 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

This one's just for fun.

Voice and Guitar

Christmas 1976, Kate and I are listening to KSAN.

"Bleah." Kate's disgusted; it's been ten straight songs by male groups. "There aren't enough women playing good hard rock and roll."

"There's Patti Smith." I'm trying to be fair-minded. "OK, she's not exactly head-bang. Debbie Harry? Have you heard Blondie?"

"That's punk. Not the same." Another male voice, screaming Stratocasters. "And don't give me Siouxsee, either."

Out of nowhere, the room fills with raunchy guitar, kidney-grinding bass, a killer voice: He's a magic man....

Our eyes widen. When the song's over, the DJ sounds smug. "That was a band called Heart..."


Amy - Feb 19, 2005 6:39:05 am PST #103 of 10001
Because books.

ita, that was chilling and lovely. And I love Deb's.

Heart Drabble

She’d wanted urgent, hot, even rough. Something to take the edge off her restlessness. He looked the part, with that five o’clock shadow, and eyes so dark she’d fallen into them without a second thought. He looked like rock ‘n’ roll, the kind of boy you didn’t bring home to mother.

But he’d given her a lush adagio, playing her everywhere, in places she never imagined would make a sound. He murmured into the hollow of her throat, words she felt rather than heard. He kissed her.

The one place she hadn’t planned to let him touch was her heart.


deborah grabien - Feb 19, 2005 6:53:30 am PST #104 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

(dying with love over Amy's)

Damn, I love a good hot music drabble. Am I a freak, in that the more rock and roll the men were, the more likely it was my musician father would drag them off into a corner to discuss 'trane?


Beverly - Feb 19, 2005 9:13:13 am PST #105 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Oh Deb, for all my sins, I heart Heart. Annie's voice is unlike anyone else, and though some do some things better, she always yanks at my gut and spine like nobody else can.

Amy... um. 'Scuse me while I go jump in a cold shower. Again, after Deb's earlier one.


erikaj - Feb 19, 2005 9:17:17 am PST #106 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Wrod, Bev. Woo hoo! Know who the killer is.


Polter-Cow - Feb 19, 2005 9:21:51 am PST #107 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

Is it the butler? Or the first character the detective meets? Or the second victim? Or an orangutan?


erikaj - Feb 19, 2005 10:16:00 am PST #108 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Now, if I told, what kind of suspense mistress would I be?


Connie Neil - Feb 19, 2005 12:49:58 pm PST #109 of 10001
brillig

My muse is damnedably clever. So far since sitting down with every intention of writing I've

  • spent half an hour looking for the details of the Borgia coat of arms (I've learned it contained a golden bull, but no one has seen fit to tell me what the other colors are, argh!)
  • done my credit card payments
  • and laughed at the critics and viewers ratings of current movies.

And now I've got the munchies and want to go to the grocery store.

My muse doesn't want to write intricately plotted Renaissance chicanery, she wants to write schmoop. I told her she couldn't write schmoop until we got the Ren-angst out of the way. She's being stubborn. I may have to let her get a little schmoopy scene out of her system. She's normally so dependably angsty. I let her watch "Smile Time", but that apparently isn't enough. I may have to give her "The Girl in Question" and snicker at Italian farce.


Deena - Feb 19, 2005 1:05:07 pm PST #110 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara

The one I think you're talking about, coat of Arms for Pope Alexander VI, can be found here, Connie: [link]

Though there's also this one: [link] which is also said to be the coat of arms of Alexander VI.


Connie Neil - Feb 19, 2005 1:51:04 pm PST #111 of 10001
brillig

Huh, bluehoney is locked. Is that the one on the ceiling in the Vatican, the Alexander's Papal arms? I decided in the end to just finesse it by saying "the colors of Cesar Borgia's household." If he continues to annoy me, those colors are going to be pink and orange.