But that's just my point! You she obeys! She obeys you! There's obeying going on right under my nose!

Wash ,'War Stories'


Buffista Fic 2: They Said It Couldn't Be Done.

[NAFDA] Where the Buffistas let their fanfic creative juices flow. May contain erotica.


victor infante - Mar 28, 2005 7:15:48 pm PST #114 of 1103
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.

Yesterday's Guitars

Part Seven

Dawn closed her eyes as the cab carried her and Andrew through the streets of Venice. This was not an easy place to concentrate, she realized, as the car zigzagged through narrow streets, like a caffeinated ferret. Still, she pushed the world away in her mind.

There were many ways to work magic, but Dawn had very little aptitude for spell casting. Instead, she and Willow had worked out a simple series of charms and glamours, triggered by concentrating on the image of symbols and sigils that had been seared into her memory. In a very real way, the spells she knew had been burned into her brain, and she desperately needed to know if she could still access them. Calling up the images of the symbols felt like when she quit cigarettes. Her head was racing, and a thing that once seemed simple now had her gnawing her teeth.

“Was not the same force at work in himself when he strove in cold fury to liberate from the marble mass of language the slender forms of his art which he saw with the eye of his mind and would body forth to men as the mirror and image of spiritual beauty?” said Andrew dreamily, as he watched the city careen by at a breakneck pace.

Dawn opened her eye in sudden shock.

“You’re quoting Thomas Mann?” she said.

“I love Death in Venice, he said, smiling. The movie. It’s so … Italian. can we stop for some delicious pasta? I’m hungry.”

“We can stop when I know where we’re going,” said Dawn, closing her eyes again and extending her mind outward. Dawn marveled at how he took all this in stride. It was just another adventure in a series of adventures. Andrew had put a pair of train tickets on his credit card, no questions asked. She hadn’t realized how much she’d missed him.

Buffy kept a small stash of Euros and American dollars in a wall safe behind a Mprint of Monet’s “Water Lillies” she picked up at museum gift shop somewhere. Dawn snagged a small stack of bills, leaving a note to say she’d explain later. Which was probably a lie, but there you are. She had no idea when she was getting home. Or if she was getting home. She thought of Xander, and then pushed it from her mind. She needed to stay focused on…

There was a flash, like a clip of a movie running in her head. Pavayne at a dingy bus station, a knife in his hand. She could see the reflection of his face in the blade. He was the same, his smile pulled tight like some demented Jack O’ Lantern. She could see him bead down on the girl, who was praying. What language was she…

“French,” said Dawn, under her breath. “She was praying in French. And the signs on the wall…”

She opened her eyes.

“I think he’s in France somewhere,” she said to Andrew, who just nodded. “We’re headed to France.”

“OK,” he said. “Does this mean we can stop to…”

“We can eat on the train.”

“OK,” said Andrew, obviously disappointed, but not complaining.

Dawn could begin to feel tiny synapses begin to fire in her brain, as symbols began to burn their way across her consciousness. In her own, small way she could touch the infinite again. She felt like she could see again after being blind for hours.

She was ready to hunt.


Betsy HP - Mar 31, 2005 9:13:22 am PST #115 of 1103
If I only had a brain...

Is Shrift around? Leviathan is hanging for me.


Dana - Mar 31, 2005 9:41:38 am PST #116 of 1103
"I'm useless alone." // "We're all useless alone. It's a good thing you're not alone."

I don't think shrift is ever in this thread. Anyway, I got to Leviathan fine. (And I got your e-mail and will reply when I'm finished nursing husband through job crisis.)


Betsy HP - Mar 31, 2005 9:45:40 am PST #117 of 1103
If I only had a brain...

No rush, and I'm very sorry to hear of the crisis. It seems to have been a temporary hang on Leviathan.


Dana - Mar 31, 2005 10:11:21 am PST #118 of 1103
"I'm useless alone." // "We're all useless alone. It's a good thing you're not alone."

Sorry if that sounded curt. I was trying to talk on the phone at the same time, usually a mistake.


Betsy HP - Mar 31, 2005 2:09:37 pm PST #119 of 1103
If I only had a brain...

Is he safely docked at the port of Sanity?


Dana - Mar 31, 2005 2:16:22 pm PST #120 of 1103
"I'm useless alone." // "We're all useless alone. It's a good thing you're not alone."

Eh. The crisis is averted, but he's at the point of telling his boss to go fuck himself. As this would result in us having no benefits, I'm trying to avoid that. And this is hugely off-topic. I'll e-mail you about it.


victor infante - Apr 11, 2005 6:13:51 am PDT #121 of 1103
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.

Plei posted this elsewhere, but since the story was originally serialized here: my last fan fic, "In the City," is now up:

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Lee - Apr 11, 2005 6:28:02 am PDT #122 of 1103
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.

You mean latest, not last, right, Victor?

t hopeful and pedantic


victor infante - Apr 11, 2005 7:17:35 am PDT #123 of 1103
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.

Yikes. Latest. Hell, I'm not even done with "Yesterday's Guitars" yet, although I'm not happy with the last two sections and may rework them. Don't think I'm capturing Future!Dawn's disorientation quite right, and my Andrew's... off. Also, I need to get everybody into one place soon, or it's going to start dragging.

Need to abandon the structure I've been using, too. It's kind of limiting.